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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Wow. That was so unexpected! I was going to ask in this review who Lily was actually talking to all this time, and then I read the last paragraph and felt like crying myself. This is so beautifully written and twangs your heartstrings.

You've captured Lily's character in a realistic yet enthralling way. She is apologising as she rightfully should and yet there is still the regret that he was never truly proud of her.

I particulalry like (in a way that was so sad) in the 4th paragraph from the end, the question "And ar eyou? Are you proud of me?" because Lily is still just a very lost little girl wanting to please her father. Her father who is no longer here.

-LWG x

Author's Response: I was trying to go for unexpected :) I didn't the scene to be immediately set, but rather let the words and Lily's grief set the scene by itself. I'm so happy you liked Lily, i felt like crying at times when I pictured her there, crying and working out just what you'd say if faced with such grief and remorse. Thank you for your thoughts :)

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