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Review:Elysa Strink says:
I really loved the first half, for the same reasons I loved your other chapters! The whole concept of healing through the joys of new lives being born, building up strong friendships and family, it's all very beautiful and realistic.

I felt like the second half lacked a bit of your usual flair. It was good, there just wasn't the same description and depth I felt like you portrayed in a lot of other scenes. It seems like sometimes when you switch to dialogue you stop a lot of description, but your descriptions are so good and I want more of them!

This really is a fine chapter, but after reading your others I don't feel like it's quite the same. I'm only even saying this because I know from your three other chapters that you're definitely a very capable writer!

I'm eagerly awaiting the rest! I hope you enjoyed my spontaneous slew of reviews :)

~E

Author's Response: Thanks once again for your review! I'm so glad that you're still enjoying the story and how I'm picturing their healing.

Hmmm... I will go back and look at the second part of the chapter. Thanks for your comments- I'm trying to make sure that every part of this story is as good as it can be. And thanks for the compliment!

I really did enjoy your spontaneous slew of reviews and I'm hoping that the rest of the chapters will be up soon.


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