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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
Awesome job. Snape was so full of Angst, but it's totally understandable given the day and Harry's arrival. He seems so cold most of the time so it was good to see him shedding some emotion. He hides so much inside of himself and has such a cold exterior, yet you showed his fragility and remorse and grief.

I loved the descriptions, it wasn't overdone at all but was enough the set the atmosphere of the scene. It was a really nice moment in time to reflect on as seeing Lily's son would be a big deal after all those years, knowing what he had done.

I can find nothing to fault your spelling, grammar, flow and pacing. It was a pleasure to read :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love, love, love writing Snape -- he's one of my all-time favorite book characters -- and I'm glad you seem to think that this scenario could work. And that it wasn't overdone, too! That's a huge relief, since this story was written... quite a while ago. :D

Thank you so much for taking the time to review, and I apologize for the lateness of the reply! It really means a lot to me. ♥

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