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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
It was so sweet seeing Sirius get to be Sirius again but I saw it coming, it's just too dangerous for him to go outside, it always was in the books. It's also surprising that he's getting her to eat more, you didn't comment on her body, so I'm not sure if there's any minor changes, perhaps she's getting more color back to her body? Or not. I could just be inferring something false. I feel like Snape is going to make an appearance soon and I don't know if I'm ready for that! Ah! Excellent job, your writing is beautiful.

Author's Response: Hey again!

Yes, poor Sirius just can't catch a break, even in the quiet, hidden parts of the city. He is slowly getting her to eat more, but as you mentioned in your last review, who knows how long that will last? There is definitely a lot of damage there and it will take time to heal. In fact, that's one of the major themes of this story -- healing does not come easily. I do think you can see a small improvement from before, though, simply based on her willingness to go out and try to have a good time and live a normal life for one night. Spoiler alert - Snape will not be making a direct appearance in this story, but he will continue to haunt Lucy's interactions with Sirius and do so in bigger and bigger ways. Thanks so much for the compliments and all of your wonderful reviews! I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story!! :)

academica


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