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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
Before Remus/Sirius became my OTP, I was a hardcore James/Lily shipper and devoured any fic I could get my hands on. While I have a new OTP, I still have a fondness for these two and I really enjoy reading young Marauder stories like this.

I think this was such a great scene - allowing the reader a glimpse into James's thoughts when he first starts to notice Lily and is in complete denial. How the usually brilliantly colored Hogwarts Express seems dull compared to Lily Evans - a nice comparison for a young teenager. ;) My biggest issue with the beginning of that part was the repetition of the words 'deep respect' - it just kind of sounded off to me.

I love the dynamics written here between the Marauders and crude, slightly mean Sirius is fantastic here. Mmm, I love me some Sirius.

I chuckled when James said he was okay with Lily hexing him. Oh, boyish crushes. So precious.

What a great one-shot. I really enjoyed it. :)

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the review, really appreciate it and glad you enjoyed the story and the character portrayals in it. I was amused by that too, definitely a boyish thing! Sorry for the late reply to this, really bad I know :( Thanks again! Bobby xx

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