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Review:Illuminate says:
Heey! Here for review tag!

I thought this was a lovely oneshot. It's something that a lot of people can relate to, and the whole twist of Scorpius really loving her and them getting married is a fantasy that I think a lot of people in Rose's situation would desire.

I think your writing was kind of better in the beginning, when she was sad about the wedding- I think when the twist happened the flow sort of speeded up a little; and it's kind of hard to believe that Rose would not only steal Lily's fiance, but her whole wedding. It seems more realistic to me that they would wait a little while and arrange their own wedding.

But other than that, your prose is really poetic and beautiful and I really enjoyed it :) Great job!

Author's Response: Hi there!!

Thanks a lot for reading & reviewing :) I love review tag xD

I am glad you liked it overall, though I know that it was kind of speedy and weird towards the later part of the story. However, that's just the way it went & I liked it even if it was sort of unrealistic so I'll let it be :)

Thanks a lot once again & I'm flattered to know you found it poetic & beautiful!

Cheers!
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