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Review:Avalon says:
That was pretty darn steamy! =P

Kind of echoing what everyone else says here; the fire whiskey was an excellent tool to get Hermione sufficiently out of character in order to kick-start the plot; but then she retains enough doubt about the whole affair to make it believable. And all the while, the reader's thinking to themselves, "yeah, she totes wants this ;D"

But yus, awesome stuff. It certainly does its job well!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Tim :)
I know, I didn't mean for it to get as steamy as it did!
I'm glad you think the whole fire-whisky idea worked.

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