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Review:adluvshp says:
Aww. Such a sweet chapter. I loved the moment between lucy and sirius. Very well written. I just wonder why Sirius didn't disguise himself?

Great job as always.

10/10

Cheers!
AD

Author's Response: Hey AD! It was kind of a sweet moment, huh? :) Thanks for the compliment on my writing. You've made a good point as well. I suppose I was writing from the perspective that they were attending a festival in the more secluded part of the city that she lives/works in; I think I said something in the first chapter about how the Wanted posters gradually disappeared and that's how he knew he could hide out there. I could just be making that up, but I think that's what I wrote. Anyway, they're a little caught up in the moment, and I wrote it thinking that they'd want a shot at normalcy, so they decided to chance going out in public as is. Unfortunately, the risk didn't turn out so well.

Thanks for your kind review! I love them all!

Amanda


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