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Review:Luna says:
I really love the plot of this story, but you should really stick to writing from Nates POV. I do mostly like this chapter, but you write in quite a girly way, works well with Nate/Naomi, but when Sirius and James start having an in-depth conversation on their feelings... it doesn't work. Other than that, story going along well, can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: lol, yeah, i am a girl and unfortunately have no insight into the make mind... but i couldnt really write the plot in Nate's POV. I'll keep working on trying to sound manly and stuff. thanks!!! =)

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