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Review:Anonymous Prowler says:
What. Is. This. I didn't snag even the fourth review spot! D: I've been neglecting you! (And I see Venom has been updated too. Twice. How far behind am I??)

Love to see this coming back. Seems like the vibe is different from WTA, a bit funnier, more relaxed. It's still got the same introspective feel though :) I can't wait to see what happens.

Rose is back in London, eh? I love how she's set up her own shop. Very ambitious, but she seems to enjoy it :) I like the tidbits about China. Many squeals during the Teddy/Rose interaction because they are LOVE. They have lots of chemistry!

Lovely setting up the plot, I can't wait for the next chapter. This is so amazingly short, but I'm very busy nowadays. I absolutely love this though, have fun writing!

Author's Response: I snuck a sequel in without you noticing! That's a victory for me, to be sure. :P Granted, I've been writing quite a bit lately, so what used to be a period in which I'd update once now encompasses three updates - so you're not that far behind, really. I'm just ahead of myself (if that even makes sense, not quite certain of that).

It's fantastic that you like this new story so far. It does have a different feel to it, not only because I have a lassez-faire perspective on this story's plot, but also because it lacks (and will lack) the pace of WTA. A 60,000 word story that takes place in less than 10 days is an insane thing, and I don't want this sequel to have that same tense, frantic atmosphere. This story will let me have fun with the characters without having to deal with the troubles of plotting (an entirely lazy venture, in other words). ;)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this story! It's great to hear from you again, and there's no need to worry about updates on this story because there probably won't be one until the end of December - that's the plan. :)


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