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Review:megan2u says:
This story is quite different from your romantic Teddy/Victoire stories I've read. I agree that angst is harder to write, because you need to get the reader behind the character's thoughts and emotions as opposed to shipping your characters. That said, I think you did a good job with this piece, and gave Lily many reasons for her beliefs and fear for her family. I think more detail into what happened to James and what has happened to Harry/other family members in the past would make this more powerful, maybe showing flashbacks of all the times she's thought she could lose someone. Other than that though, great job!

Author's Response: Oooh, yes. I think that I will do that when I have the chance to edit it (which may not be until after NaNo).

Thank you! :)

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