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Review:The Wizard of Potterland says:
I know this is being a stickler, but in the sentence: "Lovely man, not as polite as youd think though, horrible breath. " You should put "though" before the "not." It makes it flow much better.

Also, lovely story, found it very funny. I've never read a crossover before, but I quite enjoyed this one. While I don't exactly like the way you're portraying Hogwarts, I did like
the Doctor's interaction with your characters, and you got his and Amy's voices exactly right. I could practically hear the actor and actress saying the words. I did notice you sort of forgot about Rory, though.

Author's Response: The word order was deliberate; I think it sounds more conversational the way it is, and I can imagine the Doctor saying it that way, however, thanks for the feedback.
I'm glad you're enjoying it and my portrayal of the Doctor, though I am curious about what you don't like about Hogwarts; perhaps you could stop by my MTA and explain?
Rory is a bit of a background character in this chapter and for that I apologise, because I do love Rory :P But he doesn't have much of a role here, I'll try and write him in later :) Thanks for the review!


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