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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
{For some reason, I think I've reviewed this one before...but it seems to me that wasn't the deal.}

Beeezie, my friend! You have once again did something only you can do. You wrote a story perfect enough for me to be speechless because of its beauty.

Characterisation: Is realistic. You made them seem like the people we knew from the books. (I say books because their more original than the movies, or so in my opinion. :P ) Although, I'm not really sure with Andromeda...but I guess that could be sorted easily.

Flow: Very interesting! Although it would be great if you could've made it a little bit (when I say 'little bit' I actually mean a lot, just trying not to exaggerate xD) Its making me so anxious for some reason. :3

I'll try and review the other two tomorrow because I'm running out of time. For this I give you...10 out 10 :)

How's halloween?
CloakAuror9 xx :)

Author's Response: I know, I thought you had, too! I was going to ask for you to just look at Chapter 3, and then I thought, hang on a sec... Bizarre.

And yes, I know what you mean about the flow - I'm going to go through and try to revise it (again) at some point soon. (Depending on how NaNo is going, haha.)

My Halloween was good! A bit more uneventful than the last few, but I didn't want a crazy halloween, anyway. :P Hope yours was good, too! :)

Thank you so much, and I'm really glad you like this one as well! :)

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