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Review:TallestTower says:
YOU CAN'T TRUST NO-ONE.

I have no idea who or what is controlling all these dark happenings but I do know...-puffs on pipe wisely- ...there's something strange afoot.

I don't like the Debole organisation but I do like Atticus, and I think he's got a soft spot for Dom. But hey, maybe he's not rescuing her for good...it's all so mysterio...

The chase at the end, short as it was, had me on the edge of my seat. I don't know who are the good guys and the bad guys. Maybe it's the very organisation Dom's working for who carried out Lysander's death. Ooh DRAMA DRAMA.

And yay scorp is friend again. Still think he's a madman though.

Psst - "apparently forgetting that they had important dentist appointments or they must pick up their grandmother from the station." I think you mean REMEMBERING. Geez, fictional Grandmas all over the fictional land are getting fictionally forgotton because of silly mistakes like that. Get your act together.

BASICALLY DOM SHOULD STOP KNOCKING PEOPLE OFF AND RUN TO IRELAND AND HAVE HOT IRISH CHILDREN WITH LYSANDER YES?!

IT'S ALL GETTING VERY SUSPENSEFUL AND SCARY AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.

HATTIE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS AND I WILL BADGER YOU LIKE A HUFFLEPUFF TILL YOU REVEAL.

xxx

Author's Response: DOUBLE NEGATIVE, HELENA.

YOU CAN TRUST NO-ONE OR YOU CAN'T TRUST ANYONE.

BRM

But it's true, you really can't trust anyone. It's a bit silly, isn't it? Dom is naturally a very judgemental person, it takes her a while to trust people and when they do something bad, they are out. Take Lysander, for example, and Scorpius and Rose are barely there because of their wrong decisions.

I LOVE ATTICUS DON'T YOU SAY ONE WORD AGAINST MY BABY.

Ergh, I hate writing action scenes. For someone who can't write a story without killing someone off, that's pretty poor. You need a chase, a duel, some sort of movement in order for people to die. Copperfield died by poison, and for Featherby it was some sort of sexy chair sex death thing.

FINE WHATEVER HOLONO I WILL EDIT IT. GOD, I TRY TO WRITE SOMETHING AND ALL I GET IS SOMETHING JUST THROWN BACK IN MY FACE. I LOVE YOU, BUT IT'S SO UNREQUITED.

I'M JUST A FLING, IS THAT IT? I WAS JUST A FLING FOR YOU.

I LOVE YOUUU

COME BACK.

COME BACK TO ME.

And no one likes Hufflepuffs.


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