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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
This was quite a sweet chapter. It was nice to see how the relationship has developed. You can see a certain softness about Hugo, underneath all the bravado. He really cares for Xander, more than I think he's letting on. He definitely has secrets though, and telling only half truths will not satiate Xander who I imagine is going to get incredibly suspicious. Whether or not the suspicion is justified is yet to be seen. I imagine Hugo is being fairly honest, although it's not coming across that way.

The last section was quite short on it's own and came across as a little jarring. I suggest either expanding this part out or merging it with the section above. At the moment, it kind of feels like its just pieced on the end but doesn't relate too much with what came before it.

Overall, lovey chapter. The characters are developing really well and the story has a nice pace to it. Well done.

Author's Response: Yeah, there is so much to Hugo. And, yes, he is actually been honest. That isn't what he's hiding.

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