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Review:Daanana says:
This chapter was amazing. It reads like I'm watching a movie - and yes, I know I'm contradicting myself here, but I can't stop watching your novel. Your writing style is brilliant; it makes me completely forget that I actually don't know anything about Joella who - essentially - is our main character. In fact, it feels like I'm reading from my POV. Joella who? I'm the main character here.

I'm probably not making any sense to you, but what I'm trying to say it that I get completely sucked into the story and I love it. I'm just praying to god - secretly - that you're not going to turn this into a Joella/Albus. Please don't.

Anyway, loving this. Together with Unhinged my favorite story on the archives. 10/10

Author's Response: I often see things that I write in my head like a movie, so I completely understand what you're saying! I started out with the idea of wanting to try a second person narrator, a person slightly outside of the action, mostly as an experiment, so I'm really really happy to see that it reads so well!

I promise, really, that this will not become Joella/Albus. That would be the worst match ever omg.

I'm happy you liked it and thanks for your review!

Annie


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