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Review:Chocolate_Frog says:
Hello again! Since I've already read this while I was beta'ing it, I thought I'd leave you a little review anyway. :)

I really liked how the story is progressing so far. Emma seems like an interesting OC, and I liked the moments with Sirius. I also think your characterization and portrayal of the Marauders and Lily were spot-on and very believable, but I'd like to see a bit more of Remus and Peter. Though he is a traitor later on, remember that he's still one of the Marauders. xD

Oh, and the Sorting Hat song was a nice touch.

By the way, I finished beta'ing this chapter already, so any grammar issues will be addressed on there. ^^

~Khanh

Author's Response: Thank you! This input is invaluable to me. I wasn't really planning to do much with Peter, but maybe I will now. Your reminder of the traitor thing made me think that he could be the dark touch to the story, the sort of overall extending plot, as I don't mind making him horrible, unlike most other characters.
With regards to Remus, I sent you the second chapter, and you'll see that he is featured there.

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