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Review:daisyketurah says:
When I have time I will go back and review your other chapters! Firstly let me just say that you are single handily the best fanfiction writer ever, mainly because you actually update it!! I read the first 20 chapters then went into a massive post-amazing-fanfic-depression, checked it a couple of days later and there were 2 new chapters, then checked it a week later and there was another one! I'm used to going months and months without an update!
Ok, you are an extremely talented author, the way you write flows so well, that its like reading a real book. In fact, I keep forgetting this isn't an actually Harry Potter book! The description you use is beautiful, and there's just the right amount of it, so I’m not reading it thinking YAWN and I’m not thinking dayum I wish I knew more. Perfect.
James is just as I imagined him and the same with Lily. I love how Sirius is a complete idiot, but a loving one all the same. Remus...well I may be mistaken, but its almost as if he has a thing for Lily, which I had always imagined. But he is perfect also.
peter. Well peter sucks, he doesn’t even deserve to have the p of his name capitalised because he is a scum bag. So in theory you have captured his essence wonderfully!
Woah I have written you a little essay here, oh well!
Anyway, please continue to write because it is amazing and wonderful and the most tantalizing James and Lily fanfic that I have read in a very long time.

Author's Response: Wow! Essay indeed! Thank you - I love long reviews! :D
Firstly, thank you. I have already written the story so once a chapter is validated, it's a simple matter of pasting the next chapter in. :) I do this because, like you, I am used to having to wait months to know what happens next.
Thank you so much! :D I'm glad you think my writing quality is up to standard! :D
I'm so glad I've managed to capture all the characters the way you imagined them - I wanted to do J.K. justice. Haha, no, sorry, Remus' feelings for Lily are strictly platonic.
Peter is an interesting one - I got attached to him earlier as I was writing, but his real nature was always in the back of my mind, and as you've probably realised, it's starting to shine through...
Haha, I have every intention of writing more, and have planned at least one more story once "White Flags" is finished. :)
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.

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