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Review:parashar_harry says:
its different story that's why i picked it up
i have read only this chapter u have named harry daughter hermoine , i am afraid that actual hermoine didn't survived the battle in ur story and also ron as there is no description about them. i hope my assumption goes wrong.

overall its well idea but what i feel that u should elaborate the few scene just like the departure of twins u have simply written that they were nervous , no special talk to their parents before going to hogwarts , u have even not described the sorrounding of platform
hope i will get more in the next chapter

Author's Response: Harrys daughter was named in honour of Hermione. I will be looking again at some of my stories and making any changes then. But for the time being most of my stories are on hold until my T.E.C.H. story is totally down loaded to the site. It is complete and I'm adding new chapters as each is validated. If you want a good read I'd recommend it. It's based in a different type of Hogwarts, which is why it's AU.
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