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Review:TallestTower says:
What's all this, jumping back in time creating a seamless circularity and building a subtle suspense?! How fancy. Does time travel mean Matt Smith is going to turn up soon? As far as the debates of the elite literary world of fanfiction go - when exactly is Matt Smith going to turn up is in general my main concern... I'm sure you love the intelligent critique I bless you with, eh? :)

Such critique as: Personally, I feel the charming flat in Mediocre-on-sea is making Lucy a bit snooty - a future that involves Lettuce and/or Barry? Yes please! How can that seem anything other than sparkly sequin wedding dress fantastic?

I think Barry and Lettuce would compliment each other quite nicely actually. Subplot?

HOMG QUIDDITCH CONVERSATION. THIS CONVERSATION IS SUCH A PRIME PIECE OF DIALOGUE WRITING. LOVED IT. ♥

(Also loved the fact Al says "crud")

That piece of dialogue only topped by:

"‘Either your knowledge of the Quidditch League is woeful, or there’s something afoot.’"

EAVESDROPPING SCORP ♥ He should so be a detective. Ha. I couldn't imagine a worse career for the boy. The most he could manage is sitting pretty in a trench coat, but his head would probably trip over the collar or something (does this make any sense outside of my own head?)

THIS CHAPTER IS KING OF KINGS OF DIALOGUE. MOST AWKWARD AND ROMANTIC CONVERSATION EVER.

"You were cadwaller and I was quigley." SO SQUISHY ♥

"Lucy, I'm a vegetarian..."

Julia, you write these characters perfectly and I am so excited to finally be able to finish SA and canneee wait for the sequal/prequals/lettuce/barry subplot

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Author's Response: I'm sorry, I didn't register any of that paragraph aside from Matt Smith and now I'm just like welp no hope of responding coherently to reviews when I've got the doctor in my head.

Actually, Lucy is very concerned with the sharp rise in house prices in Mediocre-on-Sea, as she is seriously considering making investments for her future, a future that may involve Lettuce/Barry/Henry/the next man she finds on the streets.

You ship Lettuce/Barry? I love you forever.

WELL, HE IS A SLYTHERIN YOU KNOW. Got to earn those silver and green stripes somehow.

eee I thank you ♥

lettuce/barry shall happen one day, one day.

*flees into the night*


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