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Review:recklessly_sweet says:
i really like the concept and your writing style
but you ca=hange from one person to the other so quickly that the sotry comes off really abrupt. Also like you dont have much to convey so you are changing hte topic
but again i really do love you idea, and overall it is an okay story :)
i hope you wont be too mad/hurt by what i have said

Author's Response: Thank you for your advice. I thoroughly considered whether I should do switching POV's or not, but in the end decided that it was how I wanted to tell the story. I'm not sure what you mean when you say I don't have much to convey, unless you mean the story jumps POV's quickly without much happening in between? If that's the case, all I can say to that is I switch POV's when I feel it is time to, regardless of how much has happened. I'm glad you like the story idea. I am not mad or hurt, on the contrary, I appreciate the criticism because I always want to improve. Thank you for your review.
Sabrina :)

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