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Review:kira lovegood says:
Hey! That's nice story by you..Suggestions- well, try to keep your chapters longer, a bit longer, yes.Also, see that the story progresses at a steady pace- so that you give the reader enough time to understand the plot.This chapter was quick, a little shorter..other than that this is okay with me.I loved it so far:) I'll be eager to read how you continue this.Good luck!
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Author's Response: Thank you, someone to finally give me advice! Chapter two is a lot longer than this one (still not extreemly long though) and chapter three is a bit longer than that one... But what do you mean by 'slower'? Should I have more paragraphs rather than dialogue? Thanks, again :)

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