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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
...Why would you end it like that! That was so sad. I didn't realise what Molly said at first and them BAM it hit me. :')

Okay...the characterisation, I think you overdid Luna a bit. Okay just a tad bit because she wouldn't actually do things like that as fast but the Nargles and Wrackspurts were pretty convincing. George? You made him a bit less George...I don't know how that sounds to you but it feels like something's missing.

The flow, was really great although I do think that you could have done better if you did rush it. (Did you even rush it? o.o)

May I suggest that next time you write a story, try to be a little more descriptive? Because this one sort of lacked that element. :D

I ship Guna too,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Thanks for getting back to this! It's really helpful and I should say that I am terrible with characterisation, absolutely terrible. and thanks :) I think I'll go back and edit later
Guna is amazing!

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