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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Oh my goodness... I did not see that coming. At all. That was so... sad. Her mother. :( I loved all the emotions in this chapter, though -- they felt so ragged and raw and I just want to go around punching things, because how unfair is that?! I hope Ashlyn feels bad for being jerkish... Oh my goodness. Mild state of shock right now.

My prediction came true, though -- I really do like Zev! And I don't even know why, I can't pinpoint specifics. But I just read him and I'm like YES. He seems like the sort of big brother I've always wanted, I think, although I don't know how I knew that after the last chapter. He seems so genuinely sweet to Kaya, though, and he just /feels/ like a brother I'd want. :)

E RACHEL WILLIAMSON. ♥ My heart sings with happiness and joy! Another fantastic chapter, Ely, and you've left me so curious for chapter three. I cannot wait until you write it! I love you! ♥

Author's Response: Oh Rach :3 It broke my heart to write it because I honestly adore Eleanor but it needed to happen to fit in with the rest of the storyline. We shall see how Ashlyn feels very soon.

I'm glad you like Zev. I think he's just a really sweet guy and I would much prefer to swap my brother for him.

And yes, Rachel Williamson :3 Well now you get chapters ahead of time sweetheart, be excited for that. I love you too.

x Ely

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