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Review:fauxthefox says:
Hello again! :)

Another very cute chapter. Very interesting and easy to get caught up in!

I liked the little glimpse of Dominique. She seems sweet and playful, like Victorie, but with a bit of an edge. I'm not sure about the football thing, though...? Is the Hannah girl Muggle-born? I think it would definitely help if you would explain it a bit more, because on its own it's sort of odd.

Loving the Teddy/Victoire - although I do wish they'd stick to being playful and teasing (at least at the beginning of the date) instead of getting into the more serious, romantic stuff right away.

I really like the atmosphere of the Leaky Cauldron and the bit about Victoire's friends teasing her... I think every girl can identify with that! The mirror bit was also clever and funny :)

9/10

Faux

Author's Response: Hannah is a half-blood; her mother works with Fleur, and her father is a muggle. (Might change that around a bit, but that's the general idea.) I was worried that it would seem a bit off, but I didn't know whether introducing more information about Hannah would be distracting - I can definitely see your point, though, and I'll go back and add in a sentence explaining it.

I'm really glad that Dominique came across that way, because that's exactly what she's like!

Thank you so much for your review - I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and I really appreciate the feedback! :)

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