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Review:quidditchscribbler says:
Hiya :) I really like that you have made Sirius and Maddie speak rather than her just going in a huff at him and being really angry and upset. Not only does it stick with her character but it shows me just how strong and independant she is!
You have created some really good ground for the tension which I would love to see increased in the coming chapters. This paired with how Maddie and Sirius want to be friends but are still slightly in denial about their true feelings would be perfect for keeping the pace of the story going!
Plot wise, fantastic as always and your little bit where James talks about Lily's eyes is very clever ;) I can't wait to see what will come next! xx

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the positive feedback! I am so happy that you are liking so many different elements of the story. (Glad you liked that James bit!) Thank you so much for sticking with the story and always reviewing; it means a lot!
Sabrina :)

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