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Review:leannemariesnape says:
This is a good chapter. I really like the way the two scenes are blended together. The scenes with Will illustrate just how young she is, in my opinion. Will seems to bring out the worst in her. I feel so sorry for Mark! Poor guy! Why is it always the good guys who are forgotten about?! (lol, sorry for the mini rant!)

I also feel Kind of sorry for Lucy at the moment. She's lost her flat and her job, but at the same time, I feel like it was her own fault. (That makes me sound like a horrible person, lol). I just hope she straightens everything out, and all goes well for her in the end. :)

Leanne

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for this. I think this is the reaction I wanted people to have.

To be honest, when I was writing this, I was actually TRYING to feel sorry for Lucy - it is her fault, after all. But she is young, you're right, and she just can't handle what Will is offering, I think.

I'm so hapy you feel bad for Mark! He isn't perfect, but he's a nice guy and doesn't deserve all of this.

Don't apologise for the mini rant, and by all means tell me if you didn't like the chapter if thats the case :D I hope you like the next!

And thanks again!


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