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Review:Jenna822 says:
Awww! Such a perfect ending. You know, sometimes I'm a huge fan of drama, but this was wonderfully tame. It was so light and warm and just...wonderful. You had all the tension and worry that was proper (cause I've been in her place and it's so very very awkward) without any need to make it over-dramatic.

This whole story was positively adorable. I loved it! Thank you so much for entering my challenge. :) --Jenna

P.S. Results won't be out until the end of December after the deadline. :)

Author's Response: Hey :)

You know, people keep saying that they like the "anti-climactic" feel of my conclusion, and I tend to agree. It's nice not to have a crazy, drama-filled ending, I think. It's simple: Fleur went a little far in her head, and everything turned out fine. Happy endings all around. I was definitely going for "light" and "warm", so if I accomplished that and you liked it, great! I agree that it's super awkward to run into an old flame (been there too!) but most of the time it turns out to be okay, kind of like this.

You're welcome! Thanks for issuing a great challenge, and I'm happy to see that I've met your expectations. Looking forward to the results, and thanks for all the kind reviews :)


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