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Review:GinnyWeasley_13 says:
What a cool idea for a story. I always enjoy Weasley-related pieces.

I liked how you made it clear what their personalities were like from the very start; Percy reading, Charlie loving animals, Fred getting up to mischief-making etc. It's wonderful to look on them as little children, knowing what they are going to become.

You also showed the difference in age very well - you can tell what age they are by the way they think and act. Your writing style is lovely.

My favourite chapter was probably Percy's one - he was so adorable bossing his younger siblings around, and making the cake. In George's chapter, thought it was cute how he described armour as 'robes made of metal.' Awwh!

All in all, a great story, very enjoyable. Congratulations on the Dobby.


Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving a review! The Weasleys, in my opinion, have such distinct personalities, and they need to be shown. :3 I am very relieved to hear there's a clear difference, too -- that's something I struggle with sometimes, having no kids of my own (bit soon for me!), so it's very much appreciated.

Percy's my favorite, as well. :D And don't you think that's how he'd see them? I know there are suits of armour in Hogwarts, but he is only three... It was fun to write, anyway. :) Thank you very much, and thanks for the congratulations, too!

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