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Review:Snapdragons says:
Ooh. Your description is simply beautiful! Can I just take a moment to enjoy them? the onslaught of the pendulous weather particularly stands out to me. eee!

Your flow is really excellent, as well. Everything is smooth and sort of... melts into each other, if that makes any sense at all. It's lovely!

I liked how you introduced your characters. I wouldn't have guessed that Tamara and Draco were friends at first. I like Tamara - she seems to stand up for herself and is able to think for herself, which I like in a character. Draco also seemed pretty in character - you didn't make him magically all wonderful, happy-go-lucky, sunshiney. He's a bit of a prat, actually, but he's got a nice side to him too. All good things!

Can I be a bit nitpicky? I noticed a few little grammar things. "the castles mighty structure " should be the castle's and "I was far too use" should be used instead. Nothing that detracted from the quality of reading at all - they were just some things that I thought I'd point out. It was excellent that I couldn't find any big mistakes though, and I was forced to resort to being picky! (sorry!)

I loved this idea of Draco as "the gaunt silver haired fire breathing dragon". heh :) Really amazing!

You've done a great job here and this deserves way more reviews! I'll definitely be back to read the next ones. Wonderful work all around! ♥

Author's Response: Hi Snapdragons, thanks for stopping by! Hey, enjoy it all you want, I'll go put the kettle on :)

Glad you enjoyed the characterisations and descriptions, thank you, and thanks for being nitpicky too! Appreciated! I'll go fix those things (sometimes I misplace my Grammar Nazi hat, shame!) Thanks for your review! Hope you enjoy the next chapters to follow! :) Bobby xx


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