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Review:AC_rules says:
Your writing style really is impecable. It flows so well and there are none of thoes awkward little slips when you have to read the sentence again.

I like your character too, and the rain and Draco having a sensitive side but still being a bit of a jerk. He seemed pretty in character from what I could make out here.

Speaking of the rain all the descriptions to do with that in the first paragraph were really beautiful :)

My only critism would be that its short and not much happens - but that's probably just my preference for longer chapters shinning through.

Great start!

-AC

Author's Response: Hey AC, thanks again for the review, you're a machine, and very kind! Fast on the updates, I promise, which is hopefully faster than the time it takes for me to respond to reviews, shocking lol. Thanks again! Bobby xx

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