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Review:academica says:
Hey! Review tag brought me here :)

The beginning was really cute. I mean, come on, ten seconds? Haha. And I loved how the Hat accidentally thought it was sorting James I all over again! The banter between the two cousins is adorable. Really... the "better" Gryffindor... haha.

I like the way you've described things for the most part. I do wish you had gone into a bit more present-tense detail about the Potions incident, only because I think Slughorn's reaction would have been quite humorous. But I like the attention to detail throughout the rest of the piece. Your writing is flawless, and you clearly used your five words well! :)

This story really made me laugh, and I like how you've thrown together two characters that don't get a lot of proximity to one another in Next-Gen fics (probably because of all the OCs in the way...). Very cute and original. I'm sure the next chapter will be just as exciting!

BTW, totally looking forward to seeing how you bring in JRose16's challenge. I entered that one as well, and all the entries I've read so far have been really funny. By the look of this, yours won't disappoint :)


-Trick or Treat from Slytherin House-

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! Especially the James and Roxanne partnership - when I mapped out my next-gen ages, I decided that I didn't want everyone clumped together at the bottom, but I did want a cousin in James's year. I thought that Roxanne would be perfect, and I have loved writing them. (They play a prominent role in my Rose/Scorpius fic as well.)

I see what you mean about the Potions incident - I think I will go back when I get the chance and elaborate on it a little more.

I hope you like JRose16's challenge just as much!

Thank you so much for the review! :)

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