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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Eee! Marina, love! I'm finally here to review your wonderful story. I'm so glad you requested me to read it because who knows when I would have gotten around to it. And yay! Oh my gosh, this was amazing.

Hun, I don't know how you do it. Or where you get the ideas. But it's all wonderful. Marvelous. This was so unique and so original! I loved every bit of it.

I absolutely adored how you broke the piece up into acts and such just like a ballet would be in the playbill and such. That was so clever and something I loved and only reminded me more of Swan Lake and how much like a ballet it was.

Ahh, Marina, I loved it. I don't even know where to begin. When people request from me, I try to tackle every point of the story and all that and I try to not make it a fangirl rant really, but with this story, I have no idea how I will avoid that. :) But here goes.

Just the way you wrote this story was fantastic and amazing. You really have a talent for descriptions. I don't know if you know it, but in all of your things you just have beautiful, vivd, amazing descriptions that are dead-on and really paint gorgeous imagery for the reader. As always, you did that here. Everything was beautiful and very descriptive in the details, but how you wrote the action of the piece was different. You wrote it brief and to the point and often in simple sentences. With this, it made me feel as if I were reading a screenplay. Exactly the way I would feel as if I were reading the script of the ballet. I don't know if you intended it to be that way - which I'm sure you did because you're brilliant like that ;) - but it was just flawless and so creative how it worked out that way. Sometimes it felt like poety with the descriptions and all that, and it was just. Gah! I loved it.

And not only was the writing of it all flawless, but the plot was as well. I loved how you used the Greengrass sisters with this piece. They are characters that are so briefly touched in fanfic. So it's always nice to see the characterizations of them and how people can portray them and their life. And I think this is definitely the best piece I have seen with the two of them. And even as it seemed so majestic, I really felt as if this could have been one of those missing hp moments, you know? Like it came straight from JKR herself. :)

Marina, this was wonderful and beautiful. And I'm so in awe right now that I don't even know what else to tell you. I have no CC to give whatsoever. :) You're amazing. So is this piece.

I loved it so much, dear! :)

Author's Response: Wow Drue. This remains one of the best reviews I've ever received :) Thank you :)

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