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Review:Cleopatraa says:
Review swap!
Seeing as I really am into minor characters and found Carty as character very interesting I had to read this. I like the way you started. Most writers donít start like that. I also liked the fact that Barty was playing with that wand because Iím sure a lot of magical children who are brought up in a magical environment would want to play with one ( and did do that atleast once if I can remember correctly in the fourth book when they ( Harry and everybody) went to the cup they saw a little boy who was doing that!

The description was fantastic and in my opinion his characterization was great. WE knew he became evil but Iím glad you didnít portray him as only evil. Because nobody is ( perhaps Voldemort after all he has done) But I do wonder why he did that I mean your story is great but I would have liked to have seen it in your story it would have given your story that extra oomphf. But I admit this story made me think more about Barty.

Next to that I donít have anything to comment atleast nothing comes to mind.

Thanks for the swap! I look forward to your response :D

-xoxox-
Cleopatraa

-Trick or Treat from Slytherin House-

Author's Response: Hey!

I'm really glad you liked the beginning. It was kind of hard to write Barty as this (mostly) innocent kid. I don't remember the part about the World Cup, but if I created a cool parallel, so be it! :)

I did try to give some depth to his character, so I'm happy that you liked it. I suppose I could have explained his motives a little bit, but really, this story was more like a series of glimpses into his life rather than being one long string of connected explanations. I was merely trying to expand upon what we know from canon. I'll keep your comments in mind for the future, though.

Thanks for swappin' with me! :)

academica


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