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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Cassius Alcinder here with your review!

I think you did a really good job with this. There was a very effective juxtaposition between the beginning of their relationship and the tragic end, and you effectively captured their emotions.

The flow and the length of the short paragraphs felt just about right for the length of the story, and I liked how you worked in the underlying themes of love.

Author's Response: thank you so much for reading this and reviewing this :)
-brielle


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