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Review:MyMyMiss says:
She would be standing there as proud as ever, giving the illusion that she was silently cheering you on while waiting till you turned the corner before all her petals fell off.
:'( My heart like leapt out of my chest here, it was just gut renching.

I can see you always saw Pansy the same way I did. Not cruel or evil, but different and unique, as she was proud and carried a lot of pride with her and people couldn't handle that! That's how I see her ^_^ So I really enjoyed this.

I think we have a winner ^_^ This was incrediable, and makes my entry look like a sheltered mess O.o lol. This is an amazing piece of writing, and I am really glad I took the time to read it.

General I don't like reading second person as I get really confused, as most of the time second person is hard to follow.
But this was a very good read, that flowed easily from on paragraph to the next and your choice of words were great as well!!

I commend you for a well written story, and good luck in the challenge!!

~Karni, x

Author's Response: Would you believe that I was halfway through a decent response to this when I lost it all? Ugh. Anyway, here's take 2.

I wanted to link that description to her name (as her name is Pansy) but I wasn't so sure it worked out as well as I would like. Seeing your reaction to it changed my mind, though :)

I'll be really honest here and say that I didn't always see her like this. I was one of those who thought she was a bit selfish and cruel - despite my undying love for the people of Slytherin House. My feelings for her were reflected in my writing in the past as well. However, I read a fic by ciararose last year called 'Motivation' which changed my entire opinion about Pansy. Then this year, I read another one by TallestTower called 'Cold Summer' which I also loved. Pansy did carry a lot of pride, perhaps it was too much.

Both of them - Pansy and Draco - have been through a lot (most characters have) but I believe the atmosphere would've been much different in the Slytherin Common Room after 5th year. JKR alluded to a relationship between them but sometimes I think it wasn't as profound as it should've been. During the second war, both of them were desperate and lost as well, perhaps they would've needed a change. *Enter Astoria Greengrass*. I have no doubt that he still cared for her but I don't think he needed a reminder of the past. That's the entire premise of my one-shot - I hope it showed most of what I just blabbed on about.

I don't believe that. I'm glad you liked this so much and I doubt yours is a sheltered mess. I've been on your author's page and your stories look very creative.

Ah, most people generally don't like to read it either. It was the only way I think I could've written this story (and also, I think I've become a bit obsessed with it too).

Thank you so much for your lovely review, Karni! I really appreciate it. And good luck in the challenge too :D

Lia


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