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Review:jetteblack says:
Okay, you need to do some editing- creating paragraphs rather than HUGE chunks of dense text, having a more consistent flow of tense and story line etc. Also some parts- like Imogen's potential rape were really bizarre- what did it achieve exactly? if you decide it's necessary you might want to introduce was it Nott and Avery(?) as bad, dangerous, threatening blokes from the very beginning...
Just some advice to make it better, good though.

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