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Review:Madamoiselle Malfoy says:
I think you should write a prequel to this, so that the reader can understand why Draco has a sudden shift in character by saying he's in love with Hermione.

I've read several reviews posted for you. While I agree that spelling can be altered a bit, I disagree with people putting you down for your story. Fanficts are supposed to help writers increase their prowess.

This story isn't particularly my favorite type to read, but I think you have some solid foundations. I guess it just irks me that some characters are a bit too OC, but again, each author is entitled to their own opinions (This isn't meant to be a negative review- you write the way you write and others write their own way). Keep writing, and don't let bad reviews get you down.

Author's Response: Thank you for this review. while I do understand the characters are OC but that is entirely what I was going for. I wanted them to be completely different from the original characters.

As to the idea of a prequel, I find that to be a very good idea, although i barely have time to keep up on the story, let alone writing another one. If in fact i do find the time in where it would be feasible for me to write a prequel, I will take your advice and create a prequel.

Thank you for your positive comments and constructive criticism.


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