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Review:Maddie says:
Aw Molly! She's stuck between a rock and a hard place, huh? I completely understand her dilemma, but because we've read the prologue and know what's to come, and as much as a part of me loves their relationship and how it's affected Seb, I kind of am leaning towards wanting her to end it with him. *le gasp* I know, I know, I can't believe I said it either, but I just think she could find someone better for her, someone she can smile more around and have a relationship that's more...healthy for lack of better word, haha.

I kinda feel like jumping into the story for a few moments and shaking her whilst giving her the whole "girl, you need to move on and fill the Seb-shaped gap with some good ol' Ben&Jerry's and OPEN THOSE NAIVE LITTLE EYES! IT'S WHAT'S BEST FOR YOU! TRUST ME, EVEN THOUGH I SOUND SLIGHTLY PHSYCOTIC AND/OR DEMENTED BECAUSE OF CAPS-LOCK (my addiction)" speech. Yeah, I should shorten that title...

It's sad that she can't really /enjoy/ her relationship with Seb because of all that guilt :( But things will look up soon...right? Maybe? (she asked, stupidly hopeful and defiantly ignoring the prologue.) :P

Maddie x

Author's Response: She completely is and it's taking its toll on her a bit. I'm really glad that you mention the prologue! I wonder whether people forget about that by the time they get to this point but it is important to remember what happened at the very start of the story and to bear that in mind then.

Also very happy to see that you want her to end it with him! That means I'm doing my job properly. I like your choice of 'better for her than him' too. That really got me thinking. The next few chapters will explore a different side to the two of them, a much lighter side and hopefully you'll see something new in them.

Hahaha, YES! I want to do that too, really, but the story would be a bit rubbish if it was just 'They started dating against their family's wishes but then they decided it wouldn't work. The End', wouldn't it? The drama and angst is very mcuh needed.

Things will look up. I promise.

Though for how long is another question :P

Thank you for such a gorgeous review! I'm so glad you like this story.

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