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Review:MyMyMiss says:
Do you remember what I sid in a previous chapter about me loving this? Do you remeber? :D

Yes I know :) God I love this!!

i will be adding this to my favourites!!

Now, down to business. I think you have a really nice chapter here, but for my personal likings I would of liked to of seen Ron wait just a little bit longer before even thinking that he loved Luna. But that's just me and from personal experiences, I think as anyone else, as another reader, they would find it perfect, so don't listen to me ;)

The last paragraph that Luna said was great, I didn't comment about the stand up, and stioll don't want too because I hate it when people stand you up and come up with a petty excuse, but on a small note. Ron's excuse was pretty good because of the last paragraph luna said, "She knew.." I was like, oh that's so Luna Lovegood. :D

Well done!!!


~Karni, xx

Author's Response: I sort of agree with you -- I'm actually thinking about going and changing that bit about love. :D But I've got a new banner in the works, so we'll probably wait until that's done!

I think the thing about Ron, though, is that he really didn't have an excuse. He was making them for himself, but they were so flimsy they wouldn't support him five seconds. (As it were.)

Thanks so much. Seriously. :)

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