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Review:MyMyMiss says:
- She had moved on, had all but forgotten about him – that much was clear. He just couldn’t seem to do the same. - This line made me feel really really sad for our poor little ronniekins, and then this line...
-And now that Hermione was acting as ambassador to the Bulgarian ministry, he was becoming a perfect politician, too. - Made me laugh, It would just be something that Ron would defienetly think, it was very funny ^_^

Anyway, I really like how this started. George seems very protective of Ron since Hermione broke up with him, and yet at thr same time his annoyed that he isn't going anywhere or doing anything. I think that's great, giving what George went through with Fred and All, so that part was really nicely written.

I like how you slowly introduced Luna into this story and it;s pairing. I hate seeing stories that are horribly written and just jump striaght into a pairing without ANY background knowledge.

But your story is NOT horrible, nor did it NOT give us any backgroundinformation, as I rader I thuoght I got just the right ammount of background info I needed and a snippet of the stories plot line.


~Karni, xx

Author's Response: Karni! Thanks so much for coming by. :3

Before writing this, I'd never given Ron and Luna much of a thought. But for some reason, it doesn't seem terribly implausible. I enjoyed writing it, at any rate, and working on my characterizations of Ron and Luna, both of whom I feel are sort of hard to write accurately. So this was more than anything a writing exercise... disguised as a story. :D

Thanks so much for such a lovely review, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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