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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Ah, Mel, this was a brilliant chapter! Really was the best yet! I love Rolf already, and you're Luna is simply divine. You've really stuck to Luna's characterisation from the books in developing her as a young adult. I also loved the comment Luna made about Rolf's eyes, it just struck me as very Luna-like, especially with Rolf feeling uncomfortable after she made it. ;) Very cute.

Also, I loved the ending, too. It showed more connection between both Luna and Rolf, like they were on the same page. The only critic I have is that some misplaced/missing commas in a few places and at the end you wrote 'drams' instead of 'dreams'. At least that's what I think you meant to write. Other than that though I really loved this chapter. It was so rich in description and flowed smoothly, very Luna-esque. :D 10/10

Author's Response: Leslie. Your reviews never fail to make my day!

Rolf is like my lumberjack dream man, so it makes him very fun to write. I'm glad you are enjoying this story, and hope you continue to do so as I begin updating it again. Also, the misplaced commas will be dealt with promptly. I never really took this fic seriously until it garnered all sorts of attention in the Dobby's, so it never had a beta before.

thank you again.
xoxo

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