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Review:marissa lily potter says:
Hey there, marissa lily potter here with your review!

I noticed that over here "Ton approached her" I think you meant to say "Ron" instead of "Ton" but that was the only grammatical error I could spot. Other than that, your story was fine, grammar and punctuation wise.

This was a very cute story. I found it adorable. The introduction was perfect and you got the characters' personalities very right! I loved how you introduced the story with the boys talking about Hogwarts.

The story moved at a very good pace and I liked how you introduced Luna Lovegood into the picture. I think she's adorable and even as a nine year old, she was still the Luna we know and love. Over all, great work with this story!

-marissa lily potter

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! It's so sweet! And totally fixed the error, thank you again. I'm so glad you liked Luna!

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