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Review:marinahill says:
Lorren, I am SO HAPPY that you are writing/posting again! I know you wrote this two years ago, but it doesn't matter because you're posting it now with CONFIDENCE, girlfriend -clicks-

You really have a unique style and it reads so easily. It suits the type of story you're telling, which is sort of like a dark fable (pecked. to. death. by. chickens.). There's something really simple and sophisticated about your writing and it really lends itself well to a Beedle-type story. You don't overload everybody with extraneous detail, but there was just enough description to be just right. The old crone pretty much became a chicken herself and jumped off the page and flew at me... except you know, chickens can't fly properly. but whatever, she was pretty real to me. My fridge is mooing right now. o.O

Anyway. It's good to have you back! This is fabulous and I know for sure your next update is even better. Now you're back into writing again, don't stop! Just keep it up, because I want to read loads more from you.

BTW, your title is so lol. Fowl play indeed :') So punny.


Marina ♥

Author's Response: haha! I'm so happy too :) I'm a bit of a CHICKEN... but hopefully I won't be so bad when it comes to posting stuff any more ;D

It's unique?! WAHEY! That's... that's actually a huge compliment. I think I have a style catered more towards children if I'm honest but... unique? Wow ^_^ THANK YOU SO MUCH. I only had just over a thousand words to work with, so I couldn't go too overboard with description and stuff, which I suppose must've worked in my favour, eh?

It's great to be back :) I hope I don't stop, even if I never post anything again. I really enjoy writing.

Lorren so punny :')


Lorren xx

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