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Review:AquariaJasmyne says:
Awww Lorren, this was so amazing! :D Seriously, this was an absolutely brilliant one-shot, everything was just so PERFECT!

I love how this was written. It flowed perfectly, and really was like the fairy-tales both from Beedle the Bard and our own muggle ones. It was so entrancing! The descriptions and dialogue were written so beautifully, it really felt like I was there in the room, surrounded by chickens.

This idea was so original! I love stories about evil witches, and love them even more when a tad of humour and karma is added. Chickens were an awesome choice, too - they can be quite scary at times, haha :P

Anyway, I really, really loved this, and the moral of the story was fantastic and tied everything together perfectly :3 Simply amazing work here, lovely!!

-Lizzie xx

Author's Response: Lizzieee! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this. I was always a bit worried about putting it up on HPFF because it's just void of typically HP things like... canon characters ^_^ I see now that I was a silly to wait 2 years to whack it in the queue.

I did actually closely analyse the whole of Tales of Beedle the Bard to write this. That sounds a little bit lame, but this was originally written for coursework at school and I had to have "style models"... I just chose to write fanfiction instead, and I got away with it! With an A! I'm really pleased that you like it. I love writing in this style and though I do find it difficult to write (it has been a VERY long time) at the moment, it does just feel so natural to me to do it like this. Wow. I didn't expect to throw you into the story so much ^_^ Ee, thank you!

It was so difficult to think of an original idea when I'd just looked through Beedle, but I love evil witches too so I thought I'd base a story around one!

I am so ridiculously happy that you enjoyed this. It is a fairy tale so I'm glad that the moral stands out and is clear. Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read it, but also for spending time reviewing too. I really appreciate it ^_^


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