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Review:MioneMalfoy22 says:
Personally, I think that there wasn't enough emotion surrounding the dialogue throughout the entire story. I didnt really get the vibe of what they were feeling, if you know what I mean. Like when the war was happening, the emotions that were coming across, didn't really match what was being said. Also, I think that Harry and Ron's acceptance of the relationship were a bit out of character and that Blaise seems to be a more obvious choice for best man. Sorry for being super negative but overall, the idea for the storyline was great!!! I think it would be interesting to maybe do a fic about how they got together all those years ago? Just a suggestion if you wanted to continue to work with this plot. Anyway, still and awesome story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the negative feedback...I actually really appreciate it:) I will go back through and edit everything after I complete the two stories I'm working on currently, and the emotion thing is pretty important so I'll work on that:) I also see how it would be good to show how they got together because throwing them into a relationship is so OOC...so, I'm so happy you gave the feedback you did it really helps a lot! Thanks so much:)
-Arya


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