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Review:CambAngst says:
This is very nice. Technically, your writing is completely solid. Grammar, spelling, it's all spot on.

I like the characterization of Teddy and Victoire. The progression of her feelings for him reads very naturally.

The only thing I found a little odd was the idea that Victoire wouldn't have known about Teddy's father's lycanthropy. Once she started dating Teddy, it seems likely that her father or one of her aunts or uncles would have mentioned it.

Aside from that, well done!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!

I took the perspective here that Victoire didn't know because her family would have wanted Teddy to discuss it with her if and when he wanted to do so. In addition, I think you could make the argument that maybe she did know vaguely but he didn't know that she was aware of it, or that it had just never been directly addressed between the two of them prior to that point. I haven't looked at this in a while, so maybe I'm wrong. Anyway, you make a valid point. I just think there are a number of ways that the issue could have come up in their relationship, and this is the one I chose.

I'm glad you liked the characterization and pacing of the story. I also appreciate your compliments on my writing style.

Thanks again for the kind review! :)

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