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Review:Blaise Zabinis Fiancee says:
This chapter was really beautiful in a way. It makes me sad to think of Lily's mum dying. Her dream was quite interesting however and now I'm wondering about the fourth wolf. He or she, if it will be a new character or one we've already met? The fact that they were full wolves brings in more questons as well. I understand that Eileen will be the one to invent the wolvesbane as well.

Might I suggest proof-reading or getting a beta? I have noticed that sometimes information in one chapter or even at the start of a chapter sometimes does not quite coincide with the rest of the story. Not just here but in some others as well. I just wanted to point that out to you. It's irritating having to go back and double check, but it saves confusion sometimes. I guess I'm just abstract enough to notice those things (pet peeve, even when the pros do it).

I can't wait to see what happens with the cottage or wherever they'll be living!

Author's Response: Well, Eileen will try, but so will someone else you haven't met yet. It will be a joint effort.

I have a proofreader, but sometimes even both of us can't catch all the typos. Not even professional pieces can do that and though we try, sometimes it slips by us. These are stories I write for fun and I'm not a fanatic about things like that. Nobody's perfect.

I'm not sure what you mean by information not matching up. Sometimes I don't reveal everything in one chapter, and other times the characters assume things about one thing or another that is wrong, and it's written that way on purpose. I always re-read a chapter before posting a new one. Give me an example if you can so I know what you're talking about.

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