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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hello! CloakAuror9 from the forums!

So...on with the review! I think you have written Barty pretty well and you captured the kind of Barty JK Rowling wrote. The quote wasn't forced at all. It fit the whole story or each bit of the story perfectly.

And you mentioned before that this was your first time writing about Barty? Well, I think you did pretty well and if you didn't mention that it was your first time writing about him, I wouldn't have known! You did such a fabulous job writing him that you could easily pull out a Bellatrix/Barty fanfic!

Keep wrting wonders!
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for responding so quickly!

I'm so happy that you didn't find it forced, and also that you liked my portrayal of Barty. He's very interesting and complicated and I wanted to treat his character appropriately. I also wanted it to fit in with canon as much as possible while adding a little extra "flavor" from the outside world of the unknown, and it seems like I did that okay, which is great. Yeah, Barty/Bellatrix was kind of a random thought I had. She seems like a very assertive sort of woman, one who knows she's attractive and easily flaunts it, and I tried to use that to play up the sexual aspect of his personality. Anyway, glad it worked for you :)

Thanks again!

academica


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