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Review:Courtney says:
I really like your story so far but I have to say that I am pretty disgusted by both Olive and Scorpius at this point. I feel really bad for Rose, as it seems like none of her friends even care that they did that to her. Even if she and Scorpius were on a break, she and Olive weren't on a break from their friendship. If they were both virgins, I find it pretty hard to believe that they just slept together with no feelings involved, no matter how drunk they were. Are you ever going to explain what really happened and if it really meant nothing? It's sad if Rose and Scorpius were obviously saving their first time and he just slept with someone else. And the fact that they slept together, lied about it, and now neither of them is apologizing makes me think Rose is better of without them. And I don't get why Al or Louis aren't more upset with Scorpius and Olive, since they are supposed to be close to Rose?

If you are going to have her make up with them, I hope they both change and go through a lot for her to forgive them and trust them again. And I really hope Olive isn't pregnant as that would just make the situation too ridiculous and pretty impossible for them to move on and be friends again. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks for the review it made me really see how you feel about it. I know, I feel so bad for Rose and when I originally wrote it I didn't actually realise how much plot it would actually take up. About Olive and Scorp they are, honestly, really bad friends and cowards. Olive keeps putting off apologizing, while Scorp is going through a whole lot of stuff in his head, that I may never get around to fully explaining. I am definitely going to explain in full everything and I've put A LOT of thought into that chapter, hope fully it turns out up to standards.

Al and Louis ... ahh, so this hasn't been explained yet, but I'll fill you in a little now. Louis is a sort of 'go with it' type of guy, he doesn't like to get in the middle of things and doesn't really choose sides. While Al is like that too, Rose has taken it as a personal insult that Al's moving in with Liv and yeah.

I have to admit that Rose is going through a whole lot behind the scenes and she's pretty unexplained. I'd also like to thank you for continuing to read even though you're a little disgusted by Olive. I find it really hard to read a story when I'm not particularly happy with how the main character has acted .. (:

Thank you so much for the review!! :D


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